Tuesday, August 29, 2023

Curriculum Review: A History of Us - The New Nation 1789-1850 by Joy Hakim

This whole series is a trainwreck. They’re so horrible, but you can’t stop reading in disgusted awe of how horrifying this woman’s writing can get. To be honest, the only reason I keep reviewing them is so you can know how repulsively racist and inaccurate they are so you can spare your children an extremely damaging “education.” I realize this doesn’t sound very professional and I try to keep these reviews fairly professional, but these books don’t deserve that.

These books cause harm. Period.

So, I’ll just jump into the chapter-by-chapter breakdown. I mostly just pull terrible and inaccurate quotes from the text because these books are so bad. Sometimes there’s too many horrible quotes to pull, so I will try to summarize the best I can.

The cover statement says “Details of the world’s greatest land bargains. News of an expedition to unmapped territory west of the wide Mississippi. And stories of a very powerful Indian leader…”

US history is not “land bargains,” it’s theft. These aren’t “the world’s greatest land bargains,” they’re Europeans buying and selling land that doesn’t even belong to them in the first place. Land that was claimed through violent invasion and colonization. Land that was claimed without the consent of the Native nations whose land it is.

Preface – “Getting a Nation Started.”

This preface is basically all opinion. She inserts her baseless and odd opinions throughout her writing, but this whole thing is her opinions about this time period, not really any history. Honestly, the entire series is largely her opinions, not really history, but the prefaces are just ridiculous in that regard.

Some quotes and commentary:

 “It wasn’t easy getting a country started. Mistakes were made – some big mistakes.” The “mistakes” she is referring to are genocide, land theft, invasion, slavery, etc. These are not “mistakes.” These were intentional actions taken by people who felt it was their right to do so. Chalking up intentional bad decisions as being “mistakes” completely erases the fact that this country was founded on racism, genocide, and slavery.

“No nation has ever had a more impressive group of founders.” Why does she say things like this? These statements make no sense and are ahistorical. There’s no purpose for them except white nationalist propaganda.

“Never before have people written their own constitution. Never before have so many people been able to vote. Never before has a nation offered its citizens complete religious liberty.” These statements simply are not true. She is completely ignoring the history of Indigenous nations in the Americas and likely many other traditional societies around the world. This may be true of EUROPE, but not the whole world.

“Besides, everyone knows that in the United States ordinary people can and do own land. And that is astounding in the 18th century.” Again, these statements simply are not true. This may be true in Europe, but not the entire world. The "need" to "own" land doesn't exist in most traditional societies. Collectively traditional societies have "owned" land together for thousands of years. This is a completely Eurocentric perspective on world history. 

She calls people that don’t agree with people of all races being represented by “We the people” – “cautious people.” She’s literally saying racist people are simply “cautious.”

It also says, “homes need to be built, forests cleared, and land explored.” Need? There is no “need” for this. This is all stolen land and none of this “needed” to be done.

It states, “farming methods are about the same as they have been for thousands of years.” This is only true of European methods. This not true worldwide and this is not true in the Americas. Indigenous farmers and scientists were always coming up with ways to advance and improve their knowledge and methods.

The preface has a whole rant about how people are used to slavery, it’s been practiced for thousands of years, so why is it a problem? This is supposed to be from the perspectives of colonists, but it ignores the glaring issue of chattel slavery which is very different. THIS TYPE of slavery had NOT been practiced for thousands of years. At least she acknowledges that Natives were also enslaved, but that doesn’t make up for the rest of her blathering.

She uses outdated terminology – “slaves” and “slave owners.” Of course, these were written in the 1990s. Many Euro-Americans hadn’t really thought critically about the language they use in the 90s. But just be aware that this language is used throughout the texts.

“This book is the story of America’s good beginnings, and of the cruelty of slavery that will lead us to war.” Good beginnings?? Excuse me? Invasion, genocide, theft, racism, white supremacy…these are “good beginnings?” Again, this is nationalist propaganda, not history.

Chapter 1 – “The Father of Our Country”

There is no mention of Native Americans in this chapter. It is about George Washington, but Washington had plenty of interaction with Native nations. He was named “town destroyer” by the Haudenosaunee and ever since then the name for “president” in their languages is “town destroyer.” His treatment of Indigenous people/nations is significant. There is no excuse to leave that out. 

This statement is false: “Remember, the birth of the United States was a world-shaking event. We were the first modern nation to form a people’s government, to write our own constitution, and elect our own leaders.”

She continues the trend from the last book of eliminating Native people from the narrative. Oddly enough, this book has more mention of Natives than the last book. There are later chapters that, of course, do include Native people and even a few (inaccurate) chapters about specific Native leaders, but we start to show up less and less in history at this point. She starts to eliminate us sooner than must curricula do. We usually disappear by the 1860s-1900. She starts that process by the mid to late 1700s. This should never happen. We are part of almost every aspect of this history and into modern times. In fact, Native people literally shaped the entirety of US history in the 1700s. You can't really tell that history without us. 

Chapter 2 – “About Being President”

Natives are not mentioned in this chapter. I do want to point out that it says Washington “supervised” people at his Mount Vernon home. No, he enslaved people. She is always trying to paint a rosy picture of slavery. It’s always a “both sides” narrative that highly favors the Euro-Americans. It gets so so so much worse in this book.

Chapter 3 – “The Parties Begin”

Native Americans are not mentioned in this chapter. There are a few issues of note, though.

The author calls people “good men” repeatedly. Men that enslaved people/trafficked humans, men that committed genocide, men that were rapists, etc. These are not “good men.”

This chapter makes a claim that people with disagreeing ideals (conservatives and liberals mentioned here) working together “helped make this country great” and “which is what has always happened in America. That is not true in many other nations. In some countries, people who speak out against the government are put in jail or even killed. Members of the losing party are thrown out of the country or even killed. That doesn’t happen in America.” This is entirely false. First of all, the idea that the US is “great” is a moral value judgement, a matter of opinion. This author constantly inserts her opinions (often odd and baseless) into history. And secondly, not only is this greatly exaggerated (and I don’t know anywhere that simply throws people from the “losing” party out of the country??), these types of things have happened in the US. The US holds political prisoners. These types of things happened in the colonies that started the US. The history of US politics is not squeaky clean as this author would want you to believe.

Chapter 4 - No Native Americans mentioned.

Chapter 5 – Counting Noses

Regarding the census, she says “Almost 4 million of us were counted in 1790….” “Six hundred and ninety-seven thousand, six hundred and eighty-one of us were slaves. No one counted the Indians. We do know that half of the land claimed by the U.S. government was held by Indians.” Notice the words “us” and “Indians.” A white author should not be saying “us” when talking about slavery. She also won’t drop the word “Indians.”

Later, regarding the 1800 census: “The census of 1800 counted 5.3 million Americans. One million of us were black, and 9 out of every 10 blacks were slaves.” Again, a white author should not be saying “us” here.  

“The new country was much larger than just the 13 states. When the British lost the Revolutionary War and signed a peace treaty, England gave up land that stretched all the way to the Mississippi River.” There is no mention of whose land it was or that they were “trading” land that wasn’t theirs. There are multiple quotes like this.

Another such example: “(If you crossed the Mississippi, as Daniel Boone did, you were in a foreign land. You were in Spanish territory until 1800. Then the land was taken by France. And then – keep reading and you’ll find out who got it next.)”

She constantly primitivizes Indigenous people. Here is one quote that does this: “On the frontier – beyond the mountains – people often lived in crude huts and wore leather clothes adopted from Indian designs.”

“Boys and girls on the east coast – those with white skins – lived much as their European cousins did. But there was an important difference: people here didn’t have long traditions to guide them (as most people on other continents did). So, Americans learned to think for themselves.” This statement is false. They did have long traditions to “guide them” – EUROPEAN TRADITIONS! US culture is and has always been largely European based. They brought their traditions with them. Also she has this regular theme of claiming USisans are better than the rest of the world because they “think for themselves.” Um, so does the rest of the world? This is nonsense propaganda.

“That was true for black boys and girls, too. Their world was radically different from that of their African cousins. They learned new ways, and, at the same time, hung on to some of their old traditions.” Their world was radically different BECAUSE THEY WERE ENSLAVED AND TRAFFICKED. This statement is gross.

Chapter 6 - No Native Americans mentioned.

Chapter 7 – About President Adams

There are no Native Americans mentioned here, but there are several examples of the authors bazar opinions here that I want to point out.

 “Perhaps he stayed too long in England. He grew fat and vain and peevish there.”

 “John Adams was a good man even when he didn’t have to be.” (Again, with this “good man” theme when the people weren’t actually “good men.”)

“Perhaps Adams was just too independent to be a good politician. Perhaps he had grown lazy by the time he became president.”

“If children acted the way the country’s leaders were acting, their parents would tell them to stop being silly, make up, and be friends.”

Chapter 8 - No Native Americans mentioned.

Chapter 9 - No Native Americans mentioned.

Chapter 10 – Meet Mr. Jefferson

Louisiana Purchase mentioned as if it was a legitimate purchase from France. The problem is - European powers were buying and selling land that they had no right to buy and sell. How did France get that land in the first place? By claiming it without the consent of the people whose land it actually was. Through colonization, which is inherently violent and harmful. She says that Jefferson “sent an expedition to investigate” – the size, where it ends, what it was like, etc. There is no mention of this being a military spy mission…which is what it was. It was always a military reconnaissance mission from the get-go.

Chapter 11 – Meriwether and William – or Lewis and Clark

It says Jefferson “…wanted to train him [Lewis] for an exploring mission. Thomas Jefferson was filled with curiosity about the West. He wanted to know about its land and its plants and animals; he wanted to know about the Indians who lived there.” Again, this wasn’t an “exploring mission,” it was a military reconnaissance mission. Why did Jefferson want to know all of those things? For the purpose of invasion and colonization.

“The West was as unknown in 1803 as much of outer space is now.” Unknown to whom? It certainly wasn’t unknown to the Indigenous people who not only lived there, but managed and cultivated the land there.

Of Lewis it says: “As a soldier he learned the ways of the Indians and how to survive in the wilderness.” As an “Indian,” I’d really like to know what the “ways of the Indians” are because…this doesn’t exist?? There are hundreds of nations, and each nation has their own unique ways. There is no such thing as “ways of the Indians” any more than there are “ways of the Asians” or “ways of the Europeans” as if they’re all the same.

Of Lewis and Clark, it says: “They chose men who were used to living in the wild. They trained them until they were tough and disciplined.” The fact is, they were already soldiers, so no…this isn’t quite accurate. They hired soldiers. Because this was a military mission.

“They explored that big unknown land that the United States had just bought from France…” Hopefully you already know what my thoughts are on statements like this. *eyeroll*

“It was dangerous country, with unexpectedly high mountains, difficult deserts, fierce animals, and wary Indians.” This is a major part of US origin mythology. The “dangerous” west because of “Indians.” Wary? More like Native nations that were defending themselves against foreign invasion.

“Wherever they went they took careful notes, made maps, wrote down vocabulary lists of Indian words, and collected samples of strange plants and animals. They added 200 species to the world’s list of known plants. The Native Americans taught them to use some of those plants as medicines, some as foods.” Emphasis mine. First of all, “Indian words?” Is that like “European words?” As if they all speak the same language?? This is monolithic nonsense. Same with “the Native Americans.” There is no such thing! This is more monolithic nonsense. Also, the people that helped them and taught them these things did so out of pity…because Lewis and Clark would have died otherwise. It was more like “oh these poor children have no idea how to live” rather than just “teaching” them things.

There is a quote from Jefferson as to his instructions to Lewis and Clark. There is no mention that the purpose of such detailed notes was invasion and colonization.

“President Jefferson wanted to know all about the Native Americans who inhabited the land; he wanted Lewis and Clark to establish friendships with the Indians and prepare for trade with them.” Why did Jefferson want to know this? For the purpose of invasion and colonization. It was reconnaissance. He didn’t want Lewis and Clark to establish “friendships” with Natives…he wanted them to spy on them.

It says they might not have been successful if it weren’t for “…an Indian woman named Sacajawea.” With a poor pronunciation guide for her name. It’s just wrong. Then everything else said about her is mythology and not reality. More US origin mythology.

“Sacajawea was 16 and married to a Frenchman. She was about to have a baby. Everyone was excited about that.” No, she was not “married” to a Frenchman, she was purchased by him and was ONE of his Indigenous sex slaves. I’m guessing Sacajawea wasn’t too excited about having her rapist’s baby.

“In the spring, when Lewis and Clark were ready to start out again, they hired Sacajawea’s husband as a translator of Indian languages. Sacajawea came along with her baby strapped to her back. But it was Sacajawea who turned out to be the helpful one; her no-good husband was lazy.” This perpetuates they mythology of her tragic story. She didn’t just “come along,” she was forced to…by the man who purchased her. And he was forced to within only months of having a baby. This is a time she should be resting and healing, instead she is being dragged along to help the initiation of invasion and genocide of her own people.

“When she was a child, Sacajawea had been kidnapped from this very tribe. The white men had brought her home.” This makes it sound as if Lewis, Clark, and her enslaver Charbonneau, were benevolent and bringing her home. They were not. They had no idea this would happen and it’s not like she had the opportunity to STAY home with her family. She was forced to leave them yet again by Lewis, Clark, and Charbonneau.

Chapter 12 – An Orator in a Red Jacket Speaks

This chapter is somewhat sympathetic to Natives, but still written in a racist and Eurocentric way. Eurocentrism is sneaky like this sometimes. It’s the WAY non-European cultures and people are written about.

“The new Americans wanted Indian land and they didn’t know a fair way to share it.” There is no “fair way” to share something that was violently stolen. This is a ridiculous statement.

“The Indians would lose most of their land. No one realized that in 1805, which was when Red Jacket spoke – though perhaps some understood that the Native Americans would not give up their land easily. Terrible Indian wars lay ahead.” They would not “lose” most of their land. This is passive language that puts the blame on Native people. They would have most of their land STOLEN. This is an important distinction. She regularly uses passive language like this as to not speak ill of her precious “founders.” I’m sure by 1805 most people knew this because that was the goal.

Chapter 13 – The Great Tekamthi, Also called Tecumseh

Same as the last chapter, this chapter is somewhat sympathetic to Natives, but still written in a racist and Eurocentric way.

One section ends with “…and leave the hunting lands of the West for the Indians.” These aren’t “hunting lands.” This is Eurocentric language that is used to make themselves feel better about stealing land and displacing Natives. If it wasn’t their homes, just “hunting land,” it’s not so bad, is it? But this was the HOMELANDS of Native nations. This is language that is used to discredit Indigenous claims to land.

“He would make the white men go. He would do it by uniting the Indian tribes.” Wow, so Tecumseh united ALL the “Indian tribes?” Sigh. This is monolithic language that does nothing to educate people about what Tecumseh really did. He united many Native nations in the Ohio Valley area, like the Shawnee, Potawatomi, Kicakapoo, Ho-Chunk, etc. But he didn’t unite “the Indian tribes.” That’s a ridiculous statement.

It says his brother was a “shaman.” The word “shaman” is incorrect. Native nations do not have “shamans.” This word is from eastern religions, not ours.
“They told them to go back to Indian ways and to be proud of their heritage. And the Indians did that, too.” Again, there are no “Indian ways,” there are lifeways that are specific and unique to each nation.

“Most of the Indiana Territory, by treaty, was supposed to be Indian land. But white settlers were moving in. Harrison was afraid that Tecumseh was too powerful, that the Indians would endanger the white settlers.” It wasn’t “supposed” to be “Indian land,” it WAS, by law, their land. White squatters were invading. Native nations were defending themselves against this invasion, not “endangering white settlers.”

Chapter 14 – Osceola

Again, this chapter is somewhat sympathetic to Natives, but still written in a racist and Eurocentric way.

She calls Osceola “the Indian boy” when he was a child. This is disrespectful.

The term “Indian civil war” is used in reference to the war of 1812. This was not an “Indian civil war” any more than any other European war where Native nations joined sides was. This was a European war on stolen land. That’s it. Just because Native nations took sides, doesn’t make it an “Indian civil war.”

“Although many didn’t understand it at the time, it was a disaster for both groups of Indians.” NATIVE NATIONS ARE NOT “GROUPS.”

“The Indians who lived in Florida were called Seminoles. They were a mixture. Many had been Creek, a few were of the old, mostly extinct tribes; some were wanderers and outcasts; some were blacks who had been slaves.” Surprisingly, the mixture of who the Seminole are, is correct. However, they were not simply “the Indians who lived in Florida.” This monolithic language makes it sound like they were the ONLY nation in Florida, which is not correct. The way this is written is problematic.

“The women farmed, the men hunted. Because the climate was warm, their houses were simple roofed platforms on stilts that kept them off the moist ground.” While there is nothing “incorrect” about these statements, they’re written in a Eurocentric way that makes them sound primitive. Yes, women were in charge of agriculture and men were hunters in Seminole society, but most other things were not divided by gender. Men and women participated in arts, storytelling, religion, medicine, etc. It is Eurocentric values of patriarchal society and strict gender roles that lead writers like this to focus on such concepts. This isn’t noteworthy unless you’re really diving into the societal structure of Seminole culture. Also calling traditional engineering and architecture “simple” is insulting and primitivizing.

“Like Tecumseh, he stood out among the others. He seemed braver and more truthful.” Why is a non-Native, non-Seminole or Shawnee author making value judgements like this? Not that it’s a bad statement, but her opinions don’t belong here.

There is a small breakout box about stickball, but she keeps calling it “lacrosse” which is a modern game that was based on traditional stickball. Stickball is not the same as Lacrosse. It also says “His [George Caitlin] words here describe Choctaw men playing a similar game; both games were like lacrosse.” This is a caption for a painting, but again, the games were not “like lacrosse.” The games are the origins of modern lacrosse. Lacrosse is like stickball.

Chapter 15 – The Revolutionary War Part II, or the War of 1812

“Capturing ships and holding territory – those are two pretty good reasons for fighting. There was a third reason that wasn’t so good. Many Americans wanted Indian land. But the English and their western forts had become friends and protectors of the Indians.” I would never call reasons for war “good.” But beyond that, they hadn’t become “friends,” they became political allies. Language like “friends” is patronizing and discredits the political nature of Native nations. Then Natives aren’t even mentioned again. She did talk about the Creeks and the Red Sticks in the previous few chapters, but briefly. Even though that was a huge part of the war of 1812, she doesn’t mention it here.

Pg 83 has a story about “the Star-Spangled Banner” but it completely skips the 3rd stanza. It says “We’re skipping the third stanza – which is not often sung. The fourth stanza…” and then goes into the fourth stanza which is ALSO not often sung, so why completely skip over the 3rd with the excuse of “it’s not often sung?” probably because it’s racist and she doesn’t want to admit that in the book.

Chapter 16 - No Native Americans mentioned.

Chapter 17 – That Good President Monroe

This chapter goes into the whole Florida taken from Spain, Jackson sent to capture “runaway slaves” and then it says “but he did more than that. He had learned to fight as the Indians fought. He burned villages and destroyed crops. He captured, killed, and humiliated the Seminoles.” This is about the First Seminole War, but seriously she keeps saying things like “learned to fight as the Indians fought.” Not all Native nations fought the same way.

“Lots of people in the United States couldn’t wait to move to Florida. But what about the Seminoles? They had to make way for the white settlers.” They didn’t “have” to “make way” for anyone. They were forced to by greedy violent people. But none of this was a “have to.” It was all choice on the part of the invaders. This language is gross.

“James Monroe and John Quincy Adams decided something needed to be done to keep Europe out of the Americas” This just made me laugh…in a sad disgusted way. THEY ARE EUROPEANS. USians ARE Europeans. They’re the invaders.

Chapter 18 - No Native Americans mentioned.

Chapter 19 - No Native Americans mentioned.

Chapter 20 – Old Hickory

She refers to Andrew Jackson as “Andy.” This is just strange.

“By the time he was 30 he owned two large plantations near Nashville.” As if that’s an accomplishment? These were worked by enslaved people.

“Andrew Jackson was a man of action, a born leader who was already doing things and going places and changing the world he lived in.” As if he was doing all positive, good things. He was a horrible man and president, though. This is Eurocentric glorification of a genocidal maniac.

“Andrew Jackson did change the presidency – it was never the same again. Most people think he made it stronger.” Who are “most people” here?? Whose opinion is she talking about? “It helped that he had good manners, natural manners.” Sorry, not sorry, people with good manners don’t commit genocide.

The entire chapter is positive praise for one of the worst and most horrifying presidents in US history.

Chapter 21 – Yankee Ingenuity: Cotton and Muskets

“People didn’t practice scientific farming. They often destroyed the land by growing the same crops year after year….” In this statement “people” refers to white people only. “People” is not the default for “white!” This type of wording needs to stop. Euro-Americans specifically didn’t practice scientific farming. Indigenous people in the Americas, as well as around the world, DID practice scientific farming. They did NOT destroy the land. They DID practice crop rotation long before Europeans/Euro-Americans understood the concept.

“The south had been having economic problems. Slavery wasn’t as useful as it had been in the early colonial days.” “There wasn’t enough work for the slaves.” “Slaves became very valuable again.” These are all incredibly problematic statements. Unfortunately they’re not the worst this book has to offer.

Native Americans aren’t mentioned here though.

Chapter 22 – Going Places

“Road building was a new science” Really? Because I’m pretty sure Natives in North and South America has been building road systems for thousands of years. What she means here is MODERN road building was a new science. But roads themselves were not.

She keeps calling things “wilderness” and “the wilds” in this chapter. I have addressed this multiple times, so I won’t again. But it’s just wrong.

No Native Americans (sans “two Indian boys”) mentioned in this chapter.

Chapter 23 – Teakettle Power

This chapter praises railroad expansion, which is gross because that was…you guessed it! Invasion and genocide. But what’s even more ridiculous is that she doesn’t even mention Native Americans in this chapter…a chapter about invading more Native land (even land guaranteed by Congress and treaty as being off limits to whites). You literally can’t teach the history of railroad expansion adequately and appropriately without talking about the impact on Native nations and the significant (and powerful) Native resistance.

Chapter 24 – Making Words

This is about Sequoyah. And good heavens, this entire thing is HORRIBLE.

“A white man would take words, turn them into shapes, and scratch them on a slate or draw them on a piece of paper. Then another man could look at those shapes and say the first man’s words. Was it magic? Sequoyah could draw pictures of things he could see. But you can’t see words. You can’t touch words. How can they be pictured? Sequoyah was determined to find out.” This is so racist. Not only did some Native nations already have writing systems or systems of recording information in various forms, not just “white men”, no one thought it was “magic.”

“But no Cherokee could read or write his own language, because reading and writing were unknown to Indian tribes. Indian stories and speeches were remembered and retold by orators, or storytellers, or singers.” No. Reading and writing was not “unknown” to “Indian tribes.” It was not something the Cherokee practices prior to this, but some other Native nations DID. The idea that no Native Americans had writing before Europeans is a racist myth.  

“…some thought the symbols were dangerous witchcraft.” No, they did not. Some Cherokee thought that the practice of writing was too close to being witchcraft, but they didn’t just think his “symbols” were witchcraft themselves.

“The problem with the Indians, said many white men and women, was that they were “savages” and “uncivilized.” By that they meant that the Indians did not do and think as the white people did. But the Cherokees confounded the whites. Many of them did live as the whites did. Some Cherokees married white people. Some combined the two ways of life.” This whole thing is just racist. She loves to call us the S word, which is a racial slur. She uses it a lot. But many Cherokee “did live as the whites did” because they were forced to assimilate. It was essentially assimilate or die. Many people thought assimilation was the only way to survive. This wasn’t a random “choice” people made and making it out to sound like they just did this because they wanted to is dishonest.

There is a big description about how they were super assimilated and how great that was. She writes about it as if it was a wonderful thing. It’s like she actually believes we were “uncivilized” and Europeans saved us from ourselves. It’s disgusting.

“The Cherokees formed a government” Um, they already had one. It’s just that they formed a new, more European style government.  

She uses Eurocentric language to say people came to the “New World” looking for land. Land in the East was “full.” As if it was logical and right to keep invading other peoples land.

“That was when they discovered a problem: most of that frontier belonged to the Indians. ‘Why should the Indians have so much?’ they asked. ‘Isn’t there enough land for everyone?’ So they pushed west. Some of them put up their cabins on Indian lands. Many wanted to live peacefully with the Indians. Some didn’t. In Europe they had read that the Indians were ruthless savages.” Again, she loves calling us the S word. She does it completely unironically as if she really thinks of us that way. But calling our existence a “problem?” That’s gross. The European/Euro-American racist concept of “the Indian problem” can be taught about in a non-racist way. This isn’t it.

“The Cherokees had a warrior tradition. They didn’t know which white people were friendly and which ones weren’t.” Don’t Europeans have a “warrior tradition?” Don’t most cultures in the world? This isn’t unique to the Cherokee or Native nations. But it’s mentioned because we have to be portrayed as “fierce” S words by this author. It’s the only way she writes about us. Again with the patronizing word “friendly.” They were political and engaged in diplomacy. They didn’t know which white people wanted to murder them.

“They just knew their land and lives were being threatened, so they went on raids and killed white people and burned their cabins and farms. The settlers didn’t know which Indians could be trusted and which ones were killers, so they went on raids and killed Indians and burned their homes and fields. Life on the frontier was terrifying – and very dangerous.”  No, they defended themselves the way any other nation would in that situation. This whole “both sides” narrative she pushes is a racist dog whistle. Life on the frontier was only “terrifying and very dangerous” because white people were literally illegally invading other people’s nations with the explicit purpose of killing anyone in their way so they could have what they wanted.

Then she claims that “Some leaders like George Washington and James Madison tried to find ways to protect the Indians.” No...absolutely, no, they did not. George Washington was literally called “town destroyer” by the Haudenosaunee.

“…all Indians should live west of the Mississippi. Most white Americans – including Thomas Jefferson and Andrew Jackson – agreed. They all thought the Indians would be safe there, and could live in peace.” Removal had NOTHING to do with “Indians” being sent to “safety.” This is disgusting and absurd and complete revisionist history. There is nothing correct about this statement at all.

“The Cherokees didn’t want to move. They loved their land.” That’s it??? It’s because they just loved their land?? How about they didn’t want to move because THEY ARE A SOVERIGN NATION with every right to stay exactly where they were without foreign invaders illegally pushing them out.

“The Cherokees had no choice. Even though they had their own nation and were governing themselves, they had to go.” They didn’t “have” to go. They were illegally forced to go. She writes about history as if these things were just inevitable and “had” to happen, but they didn’t.

A picture caption says: “by the time they had to move westward, few Cherokees lived in the old ways as this man did, hunting, fishing, and gathering. Most were farmers and traders.” Wow. Just no. The Cherokee have ALWAYS been farmers and traders!! For thousands of years!  

Chapter 25 – A Time to Weep

This title is not secular. It’s clearly a Christian bible reference.

It claims “As they went they wept, because they didn’t want to go. They didn’t want to leave their homes, their farms, their hunting grounds, the land of their fathers and mothers.” This is NOT why it is called the Trail of Tears. While being illegally forced from their homelands was part of the sadness, this is called the “Trail of Tears” because thousands of people were MURDERED. Because this was a genocide.

Then it says “The people who wept were Native Americans.” Again with the generic “the Native Americans” Which ones?? This chapter is about the Cherokee. It should say “The people who wept were Cherokee.”

It then calls the Cherokee “stubborn” because they refused to move from their homelands as was their sovereign right to refuse. This is not “stubborn.” It’s the law.

“Jackson was popular. He was a man of the people, a man of the frontier, in many ways was a good president.” She really loves to praise Andrew Jackson. Gross.

Then there is a whole page that focuses on a white missionary named Samuel Worcester – “…who had come to the Indian territory to teach school and to preach Christian doctrine.” It’s all written in a very positive way.

 Of John Marshall she says, “He was a man with a mind as straight as an Indian’s arrow.” Is a ridiculous comparison like this really necessary?

Regarding Jackson’s refusal to follow the ruling of the Supreme court “Our American system of checks and balances failed. I am sorry to have to write this. It was a terrible moment in U.S. history. But the truth needs to be told.” – Oh…NOW the truth matters to her? After all this untruthful history??

“People in Georgia wanted Indian land. (I don’t want to pick on just Georgia. The same thing happened in many other states.) So the Indians of the eastern woodlands went west. Some fought before they went. The Sauk and Fox in Illinois fought especially hard, but their cause was hopeless.” All the nations fought to protect themselves, some did it physically, others through the courts, but all fought. Calling the self defense of nations “hopeless” is another baseless opinion she didn’t need to insert.

“The Choctaws were the first, they moved in 1831. Three years later the Chickasaws trudged west.” Emphasis mine. This is passive language. They didn’t “move.” They didn’t just “trudge west.” They were forcibly removed by Euro-Americans. She continuously puts the blame on Native people through passive language like this.

“The government said the new land would be theirs forever. But when the white people moved west they forgot their promises to the Indians.” They did not “forget.” It was intentional. 

Chapter 26 – The Second Seminole War

This chapter is a somewhat inaccurate, but heavily Eurocentric, overview of the second Seminole War.

“Some white settlers were shooting and burning and looting. Some Seminoles were shooting and burning and looting. There was only one way to satisfy the homesteaders and protect the Indians, said most white people. The Seminoles must move.” Again, the “both sides” narrative is racist. The Seminole were defending themselves from violent invaders. They had every right to do so. The white settlers were the invaders that had no right to do so.

In contrast to the assimilated White Stick Creeks, “The Seminoles lived an Indian life. They had black friends. Some were blacks themselves.” Not only is the language regarding Black people outdated, again there is no such thing as “an Indian life.” They lived a SEMINOLE life.

Regarding the leader who was sent to “conquer the Seminoles” – “Dade’s troops were slaughtered.” She doesn’t use the word “slaughtered” to describe what Europeans and Euro-Americans did to Indigenous people. She only uses it to describe what Native people did in rightful self-defense. This is a distortion of history and racist.

Regarding the invading party – “the American soldiers were suffering from heat, disease, and frustration – as well as Indian attack.” No, they were not suffering from “Indian attack,” THEY were the attackers. The Seminole were suffering from white attacks. The Seminole were rightfully defending themselves.

It claims the Seminoles were the ones that raised the white flag of truce, and this is how Osceola was captured. It’s the other way around, the US raised the white flag as a trick. More specifically, General Thomas Jessup raised the white flat as a trick. The idea that the Seminole were the ones who raised a white flag is just a flat out lie.

“Most of the Seminoles who were left went west to the Indian territory.” This is passive language. It places the blame on the Seminole. They didn’t just “go west,” they were forced…by the US. Passive language about these topics are a huge issue throughout these books. And it wasn’t even “most” of the Seminole. Some Seminole went west, some didn’t. Some are still there in Florida.  

“In the end, no one won the Seminole War.” Um yes…the Seminole did. The Seminole won and never signed a peace treaty with the US.

Chapter 27 – History’s Paradox

I can’t really type out quotes of how horrible this chapter is, the whole thing is horrible. It is about slavery. She has extremely warped and racist views about slavery. As I read this chapter, my thoughts ended up being “It just keeps getting worse.” I’ll just leave photographs of the pages so you can see for yourself. 


No Native Americans mentioned (even though Natives were enslaved in the Americas from 1492 to 1865. She briefly mentions this in the preface, but nowhere else). 

Chapter 28 – A Man Who Didn’t Do as His Neighbors Did

The end of the 1700s/beginning of 1800s “It was the Age of Reason. People were using their minds, reading books, and asking questions.” Um…I’m pretty sure people have been doing that for thousands of years. Again, she uses “people” to mean Europeans only. She regularly makes white people the default of the word “people.” It was only the “Age of Reason” in Europe and most of their ideas came from BIPOC people around the world, including ideas from Native nations in the eastern woodlands areas.

Alas, yet again there are no Native Americans mentioned in this chapter and it is not secular either.

Chapter 29 – African Americans

This chapter starts with a weird unnecessary statement about Pangea. Beyond that, this whole chapter is a nightmare. 

“…some of Africa’s children were torn from their roots and transplanted to America.” This is passive language. She loves to not place blame where it belongs.

“Like the people who came here from Europe or Asia, they were changed by the American land.” This is a straight up racist erasure of Indigeneity. Repeatedly just saying we “came from Asia” instead of acknowledging our Indigeneity is inaccurate and harmful. Also, Europeans weren’t “changed by the American land,” they were changed by developed Indigenous civilizations that they invaded and took over the infrastructure that already existed.

“Soon they were different from the brothers and sisters they had left behind. Soon they were no longer Africans. Now they were Americans – African Americans.” Wow no.

“An African may have come to the newly discovered land on the first of Columbus’s voyages. By 1501, Africans were living in the Caribbean. In 1619 they were living in Jamestown, Virginia, and, a few years later, at Plymouth, Massachusetts.” As if it was all voluntary?? This just says they were “living” in these places as if they came here on their own free will. This is extreme erasure of true history.

“Africans cleared the woods, tilled the soil, planted tobacco, and harvested cotton. They were farmers, trailblazers, mountain men, cowhands, and pioneers. They were Americans.” Holy wow, this is so horrible. They were FORCED to do these things. She writes as if this was all a choice. They were not considered “Americans” by white people!

No Native Americans are mentioned. I only mention this because I do for any chapter that doesn't mention us for the main purpose of my reviews. Despite the long history of community building and sharing between African Americans and Natives, I still wouldn't really expect mention of Natives in a chapter like this. 

Chapter 30 – The King and His People

This chapter is entirely passive voice about cotton itself being the cause of chattel slavery and it being a tyrannical king. It’s absurd and full of horrible opinions.

Of the human traffickers/enslavers she says, “They were smart, and lucky, too. Each of them bought a little land, worked it, bought a slave or two, worked them, bought more land, and soon had a whole plantation.” This is said as if this is positive and good. She calls them “smart and lucky”?! For trafficking in kidnapped humans??

“Walk in woods like that and you may see goblins and spooks and little people; soon you’ll think up your own stories.” WOAH. If you don’t know the history of the word “sp**ks” look it up. In this context it is a racial slur.

Then it falsely states that most lynchings in the south between 1840 and 1860 were white people, “There was almost no lynching of slaves – they were worth money.” This completely erases the actual history of lynching Black people (and sometimes other BIPOC as well). Most of those early supposedly “white” people that were lynched were Mexicans, Mexican-Americans, or Indigenous people, not actually white. And just because enslaved people weren’t often lynched because of their “value” to human traffickers, that doesn’t mean free Black people and self-emancipated (“escaped”) Black people weren’t targeted. She is clearly trying to downplay the racial history of lynchings.

“If you want to understand about slavery and the conflict between blacks and whites, you will need to do a lot of reading and thinking. Especially if you want to be fair.” WHAT?? There is no “fairness” on this topic. She is yet again trying to “both sides” this horrific history.

“You will read tales of kind masters and happy slaves…” AGAIN, WHAT?? This is a racist myth created to make white people feel better about the history of slavery in the US.

“…and you will read stories of viciousness, cruelty, and abuse. There is both truth and exaggeration in most of these stories.” WOW. Just racist.

“Yes, there was terrible, brutish, inexcusable meanness in slavery. But most slave owners – even if they were cruel – thought of their slaves as valuable property. They might beat them, but they tried not to do them serious harm. They needed to keep their property healthy.” This is horrifying and disgusting.  

“Yes, there were kind slave owners who cared for the people they owned and treated them well. There was genuine affection between blacks and whites.” I can’t even at this point. Sorry for losing my professionalism here.

Then it goes on to talk about being illegal to teach slaves to read and a woman going to jail for it and said “Whites were losing their freedom, too” as if this is about them?!?!

I am disgusted more and more as these books go on. No Native Americans mentioned.

Chapter 31 – Abolitionists Want to End Slavery

Another disgusting chapter.

“Don’t think this was a case of good Northerners and bad Southerners.” – This starts out correct….

“Many white Southerners hated slavery and treated blacks decently. And many white Northerners didn’t seem to know about the Golden Rule (“Do unto others…”). Northern blacks were rarely given the rights of citizens: in most places they weren’t allowed to vote or serve on juries. In the North, blacks often held the worst jobs, and black children were usually not allowed in white schools.” – and then COMPLETELY misses the mark. No, it’s not because some white Southerners were good, and some white Northerners were bad. It’s because RACISM. That’s literally the answer. Racism and white supremacy. North – bad, South – bad. All bad. It is a white supremacist country. BOTH ARE BAD.

No Native Americans mentioned (again, only saying this for the main purpose of this review, I mention it for any chapter that doesn't).

Chapter 32 – Frederick Douglass

This chapter starts out okayish, but then it says that as a young child he was sent to be a “companion to a little white boy. For a slave, that was a lucky break.” There is absolutely nothing “lucky” about being enslaved. She’s still trying to claim slavery wasn’t “that bad.” The rest of the chapter surprisingly isn’t horrible, but I think that is because it is mostly quotes from Frederick Douglass himself.

There is a section at the end about “Walking Across the Map” in the time of Andrew Jackson’s presidency. It is, of course, very whitewashed and full of passive language. There is very little mention of Natives and all of it is passive and whitewashed. No surprise there.

Of course, I would not expect Natives to be mentioned here, and we're not. 

Chapter 33 – Naming Presidents

This chapter is about presidents 8-15. It’s propaganda mostly. She also claims that all of the first 7 presidents were “outstanding,” including enslavers and Andrew Jackson. Native Americans are essentially not mentioned here (brief reference). 

Chapter 34 - No Native Americans mentioned.

Chapter 35 - No Native Americans mentioned.

Chapter 36 – Liberty for All?

This is the opening: “How do you think the nation is doing? Are you discouraged? After all, there is slavery, some people are being horrible to the Native Americans, and there is much lawlessness in the land. Does it look hopeless for freedom, democracy, and fairness? Well, don’t be discouraged. Actually, the United States is doing amazingly well.” I’d like to know – in what world is invasion, genocide, the chattel slavery, and white supremacy as a national foundation “doing amazingly well?”

And the chapter ends very quickly with more propaganda and baseless opinion of the author.

This is from the last review, but it needs repeating: I want to explain why I point out “there is no mention of Natives in this chapter” instead of just skipping it. Excluding Natives from history is as “American as apple pie.” We disappear from the textbooks and stories and are said to have disappeared ourselves. We become so insignificant in the mentality of modern Euro-Americans that we aren’t included in history as books move through time. We become invisible. 87% of textbooks don’t mention us past 1890. We are still invisible today and this has a massive impact on us and our continued oppression. Erasing us from history is an intentional and vital piece of US propaganda. The reality is that we should be included in pretty much every aspect of US history, because we have been part of it since its beginning, willingly or not. I have taught thousands of US school children about Native peoples over the years. I am regularly confronted with questions of my existence. “Are you a real Indian?” even though I introduce myself as a Native woman. “Are you from India?” because they don’t understand that Natives didn’t all disappear. I have been told by children and adults that they thought we didn’t exist anymore. Reclaiming Native Truth is a project that found that 40% of adults in the US don’t know that we still exist. Hakim actively participates in this propaganda in the way she writes this series. My reviews will most likely get shorter and shorter as I move through the books because we will disappear from them completely. I always point it out because I want you to notice. 

There are obvious chapters, like ones that focus on African Americans or people like Frederick Douglass, where I wouldn't expect Natives to be mentioned, nor do we need to be. This book has several chapters where it is perfectly fine that we are not mentioned due to the nature of the chapter. I only point it out because my main purpose for the review is Native content and where we are or are not mentioned. However, there were several horrible chapters that I had commentary for that are outside of the main scope of this review, only so you can see how racist the books and writer are. I am not an expert on those histories, but I can spot inaccuracies, racism, and Eurocentrism (and her awful opinions) there regardless. 

I continue to recommend staying far, far away from these books and telling others to do the same. They are absolute trash and cause harm. 

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